Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social and practical problems. To what extent do you agree?

Having to communicate in a foreign
language
while residing in the country has been said to be a major cause for a variety of societal menace. I totally agree with
this
view because misunderstandings and sheer intolerance of foreigners when speaking can result into uproar in the community. The reasons for my view will be discussed below. One reason why I believe that talking in a foreign
language
while living in the land can cause pandemonium is that various forms of misunderstandings and misinterpretations are likely to emanate from speaking a
language
one is not familiar with. There is
also
a usual difficulty associated
to
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with
learning and pronouncing strange languages. Wrongly
pronuced
strongly marked; easily noticeable
pronounced
words could mean an entire opposite of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
intended meaning.
This
could be offensive
,
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,
insultive
a positive motivational influence
incentive
insulting
initiative
or even abusive to the
indegeniouse
originating where it is found
indigenous
people thereby
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people, thereby
resulting into chaos.
For example
, a friend of mine once resided in Dubai for a year and
half
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a half
. He had to learn some of their commonly used sentences to be able to communicate properly. Unfortunately, his improper
pronounciation
the manner in which someone utters a word
pronunciation
pronunciations
(which meant something very offensive in their
language
) of a sentence to an
emiratee
the domain controlled by an emir
emirate
sparked up a fight between the two. Another contributing factor to social problems
as a result
communicating in a foreign
language
is the intolerance of the native speakers towards non -native speakers. The fact that a foreigner speaks their local
language
may annoy or anger indigenous people, in that, they feel their
language
cant
can not
can't
be spoken accurately or foreigners speak their
language
with annoying accent.
This
act of intolerance may result into meaningless discord and if not settled amicably can become a big issue.
For example
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
once read an article on an ethnic
clash which
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clash, which
resulted into the death of four people. It was reported that a fight started when a native stoned a foreigner just because he
didnot
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did not
like the way his
language
was being spoken. To sum up, living in a foreign land
usually warrant
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usually warrants
a foreigner to learn and speak the local
language but
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language, but
because of
misinterpretatio
putting the wrong interpretation on
misinterpretation
and sheer lack of patience
by
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with
locals, various types of unrest and pandemonium usually arise.
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Example:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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