Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some individual are of the opinion that the goal of tertiary education is to help degree holders get well paying jobs

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others believe that greater benefits for both individuals and society at large are gotten in graduating from a university

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I am of the opinion that there are far reaching advantages seen when people are done with studying in higher learning centres as it improves the Gross Domestic Product of a nation as well as a rise in

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of its dwellers. On the one hand, some persons opine that being a degree holder secures a luxuriant job.

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, when they pass out from higher institutions, they end up clinching great working opportunities

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of the courses they studied in school.

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, most Medical

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bag a well paying work upon graduation from the university because of the professional courses they read in the university.

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of others are of the view that there are wider benefits to be gotten from tertiary institutions which are beneficial to both the masses and to the society and

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, it increases the revenue of a country.

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of the professionals and skilled

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the force of workers available

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of the nation, they produce products which are taxed.

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therefore generates

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therefore, generates

more money for the nation

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simplified in Shoe plaza located in Aba

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state

the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies

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of the artisans are graduates from various universities where they learned shoe production

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The government places a certain amount of money as tax on the products and

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yields money in return, elevating its financial

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, an advancement in the health

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of the masses is seen. Since a

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of professionals

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as medical Doctors are always available, a

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of medical

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as outreaches

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sensitization programmes

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in place to enlighten the masses about ways of preventing various ailments,

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reducing

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the morbidity rate

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In conclusion

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while people may vary in views,

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am of the opinion that tertiary education has a wide range of benefits to the masses and to the

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as the economic

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of a

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is improved as well as an increase in the health

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of the masses

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