Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?

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Forests produce

lot

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lots

oxygen which

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oxygen, which

is critical for

human kind

all of the living human inhabitants of the earth

humankind

, in order to survive. But, every year the amount of area under forest is getting decreased. As they maintain the Eco balance, still we aren't considering the decrease. There are lots of

reasons but

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reasons, but

few of them are discussed below.

Firstly

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, Food production, As there is

rise

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a rise

in head count, food production need to be increased. In order to meet the demand,

lot

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a lot

of land

have been converted

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has been converted

to farming, which made

reduction

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the reduction

of trees.

Secondly

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, Rise not only required

meal but

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meal, but

also

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shelter.

This

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also

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contributes to the

cause

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Third

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, Industrialization, In order to supply essential good more industries are constructed and for their establishment, they have

choosen

one who is the object of choice; who is given preference

chosen

the area which is outside the living space. To meet

such

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requirements, Jungle became the primary source for them. As we have

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look

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reasons for

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cause

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the cause

, now we will discuss regarding the effect of

cause

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in future. Because of

reduction

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the reduction

, foremost

cause

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is Ecological imbalance. It not only create less oxygen, but

also

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impacts

percentage

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the percentage

of rainfall and in turn affects cultivation.

For example

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, we will find more cool in villages or hilly area and place with lot many trees. After that, Global warming comes

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. Because of damage of balance in nature, they will rise

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temperature across the globe. Because of

this

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, many people suffer with sun strokes and may lead to death of some. In Conclusion, To avoid problem's in future we need to go as much green as possible, by plantation. Government and NGO's with the help of common public should avoid

deforestration

the state of being clear of trees

deforestation

. Educated should take responsibility to teach other's regarding the problem's.

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