Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?

Forests produce
lot
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lots
of
oxygen which
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oxygen, which
is critical for
human kind
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
humankind
, in order to survive. But, every year the amount of area under forest is getting decreased. As they maintain the Eco balance, still we aren't considering the decrease. There are lots of
reasons but
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reasons, but
few of them are discussed below.
Firstly
, Food production, As there is
rise
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a rise
in head count, food production need to be increased. In order to meet the demand,
lot
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a lot
of land
have been converted
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has been converted
to farming, which made
reduction
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the reduction
of trees.
Secondly
, Rise not only required
meal but
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meal, but
also
shelter.
This
also
contributes to the
cause
.
Third
, Industrialization, In order to supply essential good more industries are constructed and for their establishment, they have
choosen
one who is the object of choice; who is given preference
chosen
the area which is outside the living space. To meet
such
requirements, Jungle became the primary source for them. As we have
an
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a
look
on
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at
reasons for
cause
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the cause
, now we will discuss regarding the effect of
cause
in future. Because of
reduction
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the reduction
, foremost
cause
is Ecological imbalance. It not only create less oxygen, but
also
impacts
percentage
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the percentage
of rainfall and in turn affects cultivation.
For example
, we will find more cool in villages or hilly area and place with lot many trees. After that, Global warming comes
next
. Because of damage of balance in nature, they will rise
of
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in
temperature across the globe. Because of
this
, many people suffer with sun strokes and may lead to death of some. In Conclusion, To avoid problem's in future we need to go as much green as possible, by plantation. Government and NGO's with the help of common public should avoid
deforestration
the state of being clear of trees
deforestation
. Educated should take responsibility to teach other's regarding the problem's.
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