Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

Energy is
main
Suggestion
the main source
source
of
sustainbility
the property of being sustainable
sustainability
of human race on the earth. As of now, major
source
's for it is Solar, Wind, Hydro. As they
doesn't meet
Suggestion
don't meet
the requirement's, scientist found Atomic energy as
main alternative
Suggestion
a main alternative source
the main alternative source
source
, for
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
.
Eventhough
Suggestion
Even though
, it can be alternative
source
, it has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
own advantages and disadvantages, which we will discuss in the
later
referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)
latter
part.
First
, coming to positives,
This
energy can will not depend majorly on the natural resources, so
existinction
no longer active; extinguished
extinction
will not in far future too. Nuclear plants can be constructed in the
waste land
an uninhabited wilderness that is worthless for cultivation
wasteland
and can deliver huge amount of output.
Eventhough
Suggestion
Even though
, construction cost is more, benefit's drive to invest. As
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
emerging technology, which not only produces
quantity
Suggestion
a quantity
the quantity
of
output but
Accept comma addition
output, but
also
decrease the time for production. Apart from the above, It
also
produces, many job opportunities for educated personal's. Considering the other side of the coin, it has it's own concern's, which make us think many times before going for it. If something unusual happens, when it was working
,
Accept space
,
then
it's going to damage lots of lives.
Then
the area should be deserted, even living beings can't dare to go surrounding area because of radiation. Good example, Nuclear bomb on Japan made an
affect
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
effect
for
next generation
Suggestion
the next generation
. In Conclusion, To my opinion, as it has both useful and dangerous point's, it is better for us to decide whether to go for it or not. If we have to
then
need to take extreme
precautionary
Suggestion
precautions
method's to reduce the impact of
unexcepted
not expected or anticipated
unexpected
condition's.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive
  • Renewable energy
  • Decommissioning
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Emissions
  • Waste management
  • Energy security
  • Sustainable
  • Meltdown
  • Containment
  • Half-life
  • Nuclear proliferation
  • Clean energy
  • Risk assessment
  • Safety protocols
  • Energy crisis
  • Ecological footprint
  • Natural disaster
  • Energy transition
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