Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

Energy is

main

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the main source

source

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of

sustainbility

the property of being sustainable

sustainability

of human race on the earth. As of now, major

source

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's for it is Solar, Wind, Hydro. As they

doesn't meet

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don't meet

the requirement's, scientist found Atomic energy as

main alternative

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a main alternative source

the main alternative source

source

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, for

fulfillment

a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires

fulfilment

.

Eventhough

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Even though

, it can be alternative

source

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, it has

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

own advantages and disadvantages, which we will discuss in the

later

referring to the second of two things or persons mentioned (or the last one or ones of several)

latter

part.

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, coming to positives,

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energy can will not depend majorly on the natural resources, so

existinction

no longer active; extinguished

extinction

will not in far future too. Nuclear plants can be constructed in the

waste land

an uninhabited wilderness that is worthless for cultivation

wasteland

and can deliver huge amount of output.

Eventhough

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Even though

, construction cost is more, benefit's drive to invest. As

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

emerging technology, which not only produces

quantity

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a quantity

the quantity

of

output but

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output, but

also

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decrease the time for production. Apart from the above, It

also

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produces, many job opportunities for educated personal's. Considering the other side of the coin, it has it's own concern's, which make us think many times before going for it. If something unusual happens, when it was working

,

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,

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it's going to damage lots of lives.

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the area should be deserted, even living beings can't dare to go surrounding area because of radiation. Good example, Nuclear bomb on Japan made an

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

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next generation

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the next generation

. In Conclusion, To my opinion, as it has both useful and dangerous point's, it is better for us to decide whether to go for it or not. If we have to

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need to take extreme

precautionary

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precautions

method's to reduce the impact of

unexcepted

not expected or anticipated

unexpected

condition's.