In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this has had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Owing to the change on the people's eating habits and their way of living especially, children.There are some who believe that

this

change have a damage impact on their health or life in general.In my opinion, I completely agree with the idea that many children are in danger due to, their unhealthy eating habits.

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Firstly

.In nowadays many

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

are used to eat unhealthy food

every day

found in the ordinary course of events

everyday

.

Moreover

, their parents allowed them to do that.

many

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Many

children have been

diagnosis

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diagnosed

with several diseases and the main reason of that was their eating habits.

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For

example, diabetes.I have a cousin who age ten years old and has been diagnosed with diabetes.His mother used to give him sweets and fast food every day.

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only one

cause

an occurrence of something

case

out of millions of children who

safer

undergo or be subjected to

suffer

because of their unhealthy

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a prescribed selection of foods

diet

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Another

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point

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to consider

to be considered

is, children who not following a healthy

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a prescribed selection of foods

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tend to be overweight than the other children in their age.Indeed, the rate of obesity among children has increased in the

last

fifteen years.

As a result

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of

the high increasing in the number of the fast food restaurants, not just

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

but

also

, adults

becomes

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become

overweighted

usually describes a large person who is fat but has a large frame to carry it

overweight

.

For instance

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I have

read that about 25%, of the people all over the world are

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Overweight

Overweighted

.

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Additionally

,

this

precantage

will rise about 2.5%, each

year which

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year, which

, mean that in the future most people will

safer

undergo or be subjected to

suffer

from obesity. In conclusion.Parents need to be more responsible for their

childern

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children's

children

child

child's

health.They should ensure that their children are eating well.Beside that, they need to encourage them to do more outdoor exercises

shch

to so extreme a degree

such

as running.

This

can have a great effect on their health as well as, eating healthy.