In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this issue?

Children are the asset of any nation. It is very important to teach them about what

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take exception to

challenges

they will face in the

future

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. Parents enforce their child to work for

money

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in many nations. Many people think that

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is completely unfair.

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, a group of people believe that start working from childhood will help them in the

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life and

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experience will

definately

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

help them to tackle with

difficult situation

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difficult situations

a difficult situation

.

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with, childhood is the most

crusial

of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis

crucial

stage of every person. The way parents grow up their children play a vital role in every child's life. According to some people, giving good education to children is more important than to

employe

put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

employ

employer

employees

them for

money

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.

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,

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of concentrating on

academic curriculum

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the academic curriculum

academic curricula

, they become

money

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oriented.

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, a professor at the University of Windsor told that 35.68% of primary school students in Ontario (Canada)

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have left

their study to earn some penny.

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, many people are against employing children in the workforce.

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, a group of people

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is

in favour of employing their child for some kind of work.

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is because these people think that taking responsibilities from childhood will make him

stronger competitor

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a stronger competitor

in

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fast paced world, which will be

definately

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

very helpful for them to deal with difficult situations in

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future

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the future

.

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, a survey done in Chicago revealed that people who worked during their early age were relatively more successful in their career as

compare

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compared

comparable

to children who never worked. In summary, these people consider that working as children is good for them in their

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endeavours. To conclude,

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the nurture

of children is very important for the prosperity of any country. In my opinion, children should be taught how to earn

money

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in their early age so that they can understand

importance

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the importance

of

money

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.