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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature? Give reasons for your answer.

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Nowadays, there are
plethora
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a plethora
 of new technologies have emerged and it has both fruitful and bad effect on many children. They spend most of their
time
indoorsand
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indoors and
indoor sand
 have little contribution to the natural
world
 because technology have developed at a great extent and new attractive things have came by which they have addicted and spend
most
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more time
time
 in their homes and do not come outside by which they have overwhelming effects on everything. To embark that, I believe, It is paramount for children to learn and understand nature to appreciate it. Because of the busy pace of modern life, they have little exposure to the natural
world
 and spend most of their
time
 on mobile phones, video games,
facebook
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Facebook
, messenger etc. For illustration, they attract with those people on
facebook
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Facebook
 who they do not even see,
furthermore
, they have more friends on social media than actual friends on their neighbour. They are
forgeting their
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forgotten, their
forgotten their
fighting their
forgetting their
 traditional beliefs and go towards western culture. In the past, outdoor games were more popular and played in every street of the
colony but
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colony, but
 now, indoor games take a place of outdoor games, these days children spend most of their
time
 on video games and harm their health,
moreover
, sometimes they become intrusive towards their parents and do not
listen
perceive (sound) via the auditory sense
hear
 them at all by which they go towards the wrong direction
then
 they realise in the future that their parents are always right but till
then
time
 goes. It is very important for children to realise it and understand and appreciate nature as fast as possible because it makes them practical. They tend to find their happiness in actual
world
 rather than fake
world
. To sum up,
government
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the government
 should apply some rules to overcome it
such
 as give opportunities
to
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for
 outdoor games by which children are
engeged
having ones attention or mind or energy engaged
engaged
 in these type of
activies
any specific behavior
activities
activism
 and should ban some applications.
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