Essay Topic: Some people think that giving money as gift to teenagers is good while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

This

essay is about to giving

money

as

gift

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a gift

to young and teenagers, but many of them are

disagreed

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disagreeing

.

Although

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Despite

its tradition in many

countries especially when

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countries, especially when

youngsters are achieving some targets, or completing their studies, they expect to receive some gifts and surprises from their elders.

Hence

its definitely important to enhance their confidence and

moral

a state of individual psychological well-being based upon a sense of confidence and usefulness and purpose

morale

. I am

strong advocate

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a strong advocate

of

this

approach to give

money

as surprises on different occasions

instead

of other gifts When we talk about presents for teenagers, they get

to

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

excited and will put more efforts in their targets,

in other words

,

its

it is

it's

significantly important to build their interest. In

term

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terms

of gifts, there will be many options

such

as, offering them a mobile, game stations, but they will be more excited and cherish for the

money

.

Moreover

, we could even arrange dinners and parties at home on achievement’s, but with the provided

money

, they can arrange and use the

money

in their own way.

For example

, they might be interested to spend

money

with their friend’s, during the school or university tours.

Also

, the

money

will give them

opportunity

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the opportunity

an opportunity

opportunities

to enhance their ability to think, how and where to spend.

Furthermore

, many elders aren’t in the

favor

promote over another

favour

fever

of

money

for teenagers, they might be thinking it’s not safe for the child’s, to not lose control on them. Because when the teenagers can have

money

, many in their younger age are immature and careless sometimes, which might lead them to wrong directions. After the thorough discussion, about the both

point

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points

of view, in conclusion, they both somehow right with their technical analysis and point of view. So, the decision depends on the situation and the teenager age.

However

, in my opinion, I would say that,

yes it’s

Accept comma addition

yes, it’s

better to give them

money

, for their confidence and to earn their trust, for better growth and healthy environment.