some people believe teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects, even ones they do not enjoy. others, however, believe that teenagers should only focus on the subjects they are best at or find most interesting. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's competitive world, a broad knowledge is needed to succeed in any field. Different people have different mindset. Some section of society deem that teenagers should learn all

school

subjects, even they do not enjoy, whereas, others opine that they should only focus on those subjects which they find most interesting or they are best at. The following paragraphs would shed light

on to

to on

onto

the approaches before making the final conclusion along with my perspective. To

comence

take the first step or steps in carrying out an action

commence

commences

commenced

with the

first

notion, there are myriad things to be shared in the

first

statement.

first

preceding all others in time or space or degree

First

and foremost, student should learn all the subjects at

school

level. Nowadays, the job market is very demanding and the recruiters select students who are skilled in various

field

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fields

. Having knowledge of varied subjects during

school

time definitely widens the horizons

for

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of

the students.

Besides

this

, It is well known fact that most subjects are related to

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a legal document codifying the result of deliberations of a committee or society or legislative body

act

elect

enact

other in some way or the other.

For example

, a basic knowledge of mathematics is needed to excel in computer language.

Finally

, I believe that it is

upto

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up to

the teacher to

develope

make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation

develop

interest

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the interest

of the students in any subject.

For example

, during my

school

days my history teacher was so good that a boring subject like history was the favourite subject of the whole class.

However

, there is an eminent adage that says, "beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder'',

likewise

, others believe that students should not have to

study

all the subjects and should be allowed to choose the subjects they want to

study

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

they thinks

thatin

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that in

this

case the students will probably be more enthusiastic about their

study

.

In

addition by

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addition, by

forcing to

study

all the subjects not only they will

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

interest in

education but

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education, but

also

they will be constantly under a lot of pressure.

For example

, there was a survey done by the times of

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

in 2013 which stated that around 5000 students behind every million of

students

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the students

suffered from hypertension due to a lot of pressure during studying plethora of subjects at the same time. In conclusion, it can be said that as "every coin has two sides'', in the same

manner both

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manner, both

aspects of studying all the subjects in

school

are crucial for both

group

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groups

of people and

can not

can not

cannot

be denied.