Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism brings more advantages or disadvantages to a country?

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Tourism
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has improved
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is improving
so much these days and there has been an increase in the
number
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of people travelling around the world.
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has both advantages and disadvantages and
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essay will discuss both the view points and why I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
in the former argument. On the one hand, many people argue that
tourism
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is causing detrimental effect on the country. As the
number
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of visitors
increase
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increases
, the culture and lifestyle of people are affected since they are forced to welcome tourists. Many poor nations use
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as a means of living and they are even ready to change their food habits
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in order
to
accomodate
be agreeable or acceptable to
accommodate
foreigners. Another aspect is the change in environment. Many forests and natural reserves are destroyed to make resorts and beaches thereby affecting the natural ecosystem.
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, I believe that development in
tourism
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is a positive move. As the
number
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of people visiting a country grows, the economy will naturally improve.
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,
inorder
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in order
to entertain visitors, governments make better transportation and housing facilities and
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improves the country's standard of living.
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, Kerala is a small state in
India which
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India, which
was unknown to outsiders. Now, a huge
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of people are able to visit
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place and due to the scenic beauty,
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place is called God's Own Country. Another advantage is that
tourism
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has helped to make the people more aware of other countries which help them to appreciate other culture and tradition To conclude, every change has both positives and negatives and
tourism
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industry is no different from
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. Even though there are disadvantages, I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that the positive aspects outweigh
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.
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