Some people believe they should keep all they money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that they should rather save their money than pay tax to the state. In my

opinion I

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opinion, I

disagree with

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statement and believe that through the payment of taxes life is improved.

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essay seeks to discuss

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further

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. The primary reason why the people pay taxes is to support the

government

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in providing social amenities which individuals or private firms may find very difficult to provide solely.

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most individuals find it difficult to afford

tution

a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)

tuition

fees and health care. Through taxes

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quality education and health care can reach the poor.

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in turn improves quality and standard of living.

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, taxes paid by people during their active service years grants them access to

medicare

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Medicare

medicate

during retirement.

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, most aged people end up staying in the care homes which are funded by the

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. It is irrefutable that most times individuals prefer to keep their money for personal use and believe that the

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can generate funds through other means and not taxes.

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, these people provide their basic needs or patronize private establishment

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as schools,

hopitals

a health facility where patients receive treatment

hospitals

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continuing in the same way

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for services.

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, they may feel

skeptical

denying or questioning the tenets of especially a religion

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about paying taxes because of miss use of

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funds

by the

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. In conclusion, payment of taxes enables the smooth running of the state and ensures eradication of poverty in the society as everybody

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benefits from amenities provided by the

government

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

contribute
welfare
public services
progressive taxation
distribution of wealth
civic duty
social cohesion
tax evasion
economic disparities
social unrest
individual rights
societal responsibilities

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