The importance of biodiversity is being more widely recognised as increasing numbers of species come under threat. What can be done to maintain biodiversity?

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There is no doubt that different species of
animals
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Animals
are being increasingly endangered.
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result people
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result, people
have been more environmentally aware, especially regarding the significance of biodiversity. Because of
this
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significance, serious steps should be taken for biodiversity maintenance.
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, natural
habitats
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habitat
preservation is very important to ensure the safety of flora and fauna. And
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step can mainly be achieved by restricting human actions which destroy wildlife habitats,
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as logging which destroys rainforests and over grazing which damages grasslands. In South America,
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, there is a vast unspoilt forest, where hunting, logging and lighting a fire
are Strictly forbidden
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is Strictly forbidden
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a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
consequences
,
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land is considered a treasure of rare birds and
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
unique animal species. As
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example shows, protecting natural environments can promote the
biodivesity
the diversity of plant and animal life in a particular habitat (or in the world as a whole)
biodiversity
.
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to that, threatened creatures can
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kept in safe places for a stage of their lives to rescue them from extinction.
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, a Russian project, which aimed to prevent a sort of birds from being extinct, took the eggs directly from the mother birds and conserves them in special conditions away from predators, until they hatched, and returned the their environment afterwards. As shown in
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example, there are effective Strategies to
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avoidable threatens on animals. In conclusion,
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the ecosystem Suffers from
dangers
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the dangers
which threaten the biodiversity, these dangers.
are
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not inevitable, and can be alleviated by preserving natural habitats and animals which are likely to disappear. The more responsible human being is to the earth, the healthier environment they will enjoy.
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