According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities worldwide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction.

During the past decade, technology has impressively developed.
As a result
of that people have changed their daily routings significantly. Some folks say that the
internet
has become the number one
communication
method, while others insist that, traditional
way
of
interaction
is much effective. I am going to discuss both these point before come to a conclusion.
Firstly
, some folks
insist
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insists
that traditional
way
of
communication
has overridden by the
internet
. I could not
agree it more
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agree with it more
. Because there are ample of platforms have been developed by the tech companies which makes
communication
easier.
Also
, everything has become extremely easy and cost effective which make everyone to fall
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
those platforms. Other than that, it is easier to start
new relationship
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a new relationship
new relationships
with the people met
in
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on
the
internet
. Because those platforms suggest people as friends who hold the similar desires by extremely good algorithms. It is
true fact
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a true fact
that the
internet
is controlling our lives.
Secondly
, some other folks hold the notion that traditional
way
of
interaction
is always necessary when it comes to
communication
. Because they insist that people can be cheated by fake people over the
internet
. They believe that real
interaction
is more effective and collaborative.
For example
, when two individuals talk to each other
face
to
face
, it strengthens their relationship more compare to take over the
internet
. And these relationships are going to
last
forever than the relationships build over the
internet
. Still the traditional
way
of
interaction
is inevitable. I strongly believe that the
internet
is controlling our lives than before. And
this
will continue.
For example
, I used to hang out with my friends and relations frequently, before these social media platforms and the
internet
comes to my life. But now I have learned that
communication
over the
internet
is not much effective than the real conversation by
face
to
face
. In conclusion, we should adapt these technologies to our lives. We should control the technology, and not let the technology control us.
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