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Governments prohibiting the underage children for getting full-time jobs in certain countries. Do you agree or disagree?

#governments #children #jobs #countries
How to protect of
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How to protect
 underage children has become a hot topic of discussion these days. Some nations
has banned
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have banned
 children from working full-time jobs as it raises a number of worrying issues which includes lack of education and generates negative impacts on the body
development
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develops
.
This
 essay will argue why I completely agree that prohibiting children from working is a necessary measure. One negative consequence of allowing youth to
work
 is that they won’t able to utilize their valuable time to receive useful knowledge and learn essential skills that will reward them later on in the future. People need to realize that education plays a crucial role in shaping people’s personality and to illustrate, it has been scientifically proven that human can absorb knowledge much easier during childhood. For
this
 reason, it is vital for children to receive proper education at school rather than
work
 at their early stage of life. Apart from
this
, another challenge that associated with
this
 is that children’s health can be adversely affected by doing various jobs which can have long term negative implications on their future.
For example
, a recent study conducted in Japan has revealed that due to lack of necessary skills in the
work place
a place where work is done
workplace
, youngsters always stuck in numerous repetitive and laborious jobs like many sweatshops in the developing country and these
unfavorable
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
 working conditions are definitely detrimental to their body and health. As can be seen, allowing children to
work
 could potentially lead to a far worse outcome for both individuals and society. To sum up, whether or not authorities should ban underage children to
work
 is controversial in recent years. Taking everything into consideration, I strongly believe that prohibiting children from working is an absolute imperative
that is
 entirely justified.
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