Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?

The booming development of

entertainment industry

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the entertainment industry

is increasingly being witnessed these days. Whether or not celebrities are overpaid has become a hot topic of discussion in the

society

.

This

essay will analysis the reason of

this

and suggest other occupations which deserve to be highly paid.

Entertainers

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Entertainers, such

such

as athletes, singers and actors play a crucial role in our daily life as it is essential to rescue us from loneliness and boredom, so there is no doubt that a majority of celebrities are wealthy because they tend to earn a huge amount of money in a short period of time due to their fame in the public. To illustrate, many stars in Hollywood are highly paid by some companies to endorse their brands and products in order to improve their exposure in the public and maximize their revenues in the market. As can be seen, they can earn an excessive amount of money easily, while people in other industries are not paid enough. There are various other jobs deserve to be offered more

money especially

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money, especially

those who make much greater contributions to the

society

. Teachers, doctors, scientists and soldiers

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are playing

play

have played

a vital role in our

society

that should be rewarded a reasonably higher income so more people will be encouraged to opt them as future careers. Another type of profession is worthy to be paid more is those associated with risks and

dangerous

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dangers

such

as fire fighters,

polices

the force of policemen and officers

police

and soldiers, so a good income can be a reflect on their contributions to the

society

. To sum up, whether or not famous people are overpaid is debatable nowadays. I’m inclined to say that there is a wide range of occupations deserving better salaries.