Fossil fuel (coal, oil and natural gas) are the main sources in many countries.But in some other countries the use of alternative sources of energy (wind energy and solar)are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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So many countries are
opportuned
of great significance or value
important
to have crude oil as one of their major natural resources while others make use of wind and solar
enery
(physics) a thermodynamic quantity equivalent to the capacity of a physical system to do work; the units of energy are joules or ergs
energy
as their main
source
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of
energy
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.
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
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seeks to discuss these various forms of
energy
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to know if its a negative or positive development. Fossil fuels
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as coal, oil and natural
gas which
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gas, which
are products of crude oil has been the main
source
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of
energy
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for so many countries.
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A wide number
of transport systems have benefited from fossil fuels.
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, locomotive trains and ships used coal as their
source
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energy
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. But recently, the use
disel
an internal-combustion engine that burns heavy oil
diesel
and premium motor spirit
is
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are
the main
source
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of
energy
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for many automobiles.
Futhermore
in addition
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, countries which produce these natural gases are known to make a large amount of money through exportation.
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in turn affects the
countries
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country's
economy positively. Constant burning of fossil fuels causes depletion in the atmosphere and in turn the world is faced with global warming.
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, wind and solar energies have combated the problem of global warming.
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alternative is mostly used in so many countries that don’t have natural gas. Since these forms of
enery
(physics) a thermodynamic quantity equivalent to the capacity of a physical system to do work; the units of energy are joules or ergs
energy
supply are controlled by nature, there might not be enough sun to convert
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energy
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into solar or enough wind to get the windmills working. In conclusion, fossil fuels invention is of great benefit and its
drwabacks
the quality of being a hindrance
drawbacks
can be relieved with the use of windmills and solar
energy
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as substitutes.
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