Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether the success of an individual is determined by parents' way of upbringing, or other circumstances lay at the base of it, is a controversial topic. While, many people think that a person could achieve success only by receiving a good parental

education

, I

wholeheardely

without reserve; without reservation

wholeheartedly

believe that

school

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the school

plays a pivotal role and is

responsabile

worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable

responsible

for

children's level

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the children's level

of achievement.

To begin

, many people agree with the statement for some noteworthy reasons. The most remarkable is that parental guidance is

essencial

absolutely necessary; vitally necessary

essential

essentially

for getting

dismiss from the mind; stop remembering

forgetting

an important career in life as children spend the majority of time at home.

For

example

, parents pave the way of their children and guide them

to

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in

choosing proper choices. Another reason is that parents support their children with financial resources and

emotioal

determined or actuated by emotion rather than reason

emotional

as well.

For instance

, all the university fees and living expenses are paid by parents.

However

, their

education

fade

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fades

in comparison to academical

education

.

Nevertheless

, there are some advocates that argue school is far more important than the

education

given to children by parents.

Firsty

preceding all others in time or space or degree

First

Firstly

, professors teach crucial lessons that every time come in useful later in life.

For

example

, children learn to write and read at school.

Therefore

, it contributes

definetely

without question and beyond doubt

definitely

to reaching success.

Secondly

, kids learn various subjects during academical lessons.

As a result

, they find out quickly what they like and what they are good at. The best

example

, is my sister who has become a well-known singer in my hometown due

tu

in the direction of

to

her tutor who discovered her talent and encouraged her to pursue a career. All in all, when all specific reasons and relevant

example are

Accept comma addition

example, are

considered and evaluated, I

storngly

with strength or in a strong manner

strongly

agree that tutors are of great significance when it comes to becoming successful when children are

fully

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full

-grown.