people think that dangerous sports should be baned while others think people should be free to choose discuss both view and give your opinion

Nowadays
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the kinds of
sportes
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sports
spots
supports
are increased
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one we can find dangerous sports and sage sports
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However it
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However, it
is commonly believed that dangerous sports should be prevented from governments
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whereas others believed that
this
descusion
an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic
discussion
decision
up to people and their choices
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In my opinion
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I strongly agree with that each person is
respnsible
worthy of or requiring responsibility or trust; or held accountable
responsible
for his
descusion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
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In
this
essay I will discuss
this
universial
of worldwide scope or applicability
universal
issue
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Firstly
, there is no doubt that sports are
consiedered
carefully weighed
considered
as a hope and it carries a lot of interesting moments during
practtice
a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
practise
practiced
it, but some people thought that keeping alive is more important than having a fun
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Besides
, governments should prevent
this
kind of sports
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For instance
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according to a survey in
Astralia
a nation occupying the whole of the Australian continent; Aboriginal tribes are thought to have migrated from southeastern Asia 20,000 years ago; first Europeans were British convicts sent there as a penal colony
Australia
most of
climbers
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the climbers
to
Iverest
a mountain in the central Himalayas on the border of Tibet and Nepal; the highest mountain peak in the world (29,028 feet high)
Everest
lose their life during the climbing time
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so
to a very great extent or degree
So
a sport like climbing should not be
supported it
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supported, it
should be
preventd
keep from happening or arising; make impossible
prevented
presented
solely
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secondly
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Secondly
, in some countries it is known that when you are 18 years old you will be responsible for and your
dicisions even
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decisions, even
decisions even
decision even
so if it was wrong or dangerous
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because in
this
period of life people are able to realize the good things for them
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Morever
in addition
Moreover
, player sports should take their own decisions and choose their sport
For example
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in The Good Doctor
series there
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series, there
was a patient who fell during his climbing after finishing his cure, all what he want is to climb again and again because is part of his
live
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life
liver
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So it is unfair to tell people what the should do and what they should not
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To conclude
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In my opinion I strongly agree with that we should give a space for sports players
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and I appeal government to afford the
safty
free from danger or the risk of harm
safest
soft
ways and support sport players as much as they can
.
Accept space
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