Air travel causes environmental pollution, so many people believe that there should be an increase in the price of air tickets in order to reduce air traffic. Do you agree or disagree?

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The salad days of

third millennium

Suggestion

the third millennium

has seen

Suggestion

have seen

a prolific increase in people who

travel

air

Consequently

, there has been a view that

air

travel

increases environmental pollution.

Although

there are

few arguments

Suggestion

a few arguments

favor

promote over another

favour

of hiking the price of airline tickets in order to reduce

air

traffic, I am of the opinion that there are much better ways to tackle

this

problem.

To begin

, one of the main arguments of the proponents of

increase

Suggestion

the increase

airplane

a hose that carries air under pressure

airline

tickets is that

this

may hinder people from flying very often.

However

, I believe

this

argument does not stand up to scrutiny as there are clear evidences to suggest that those consider

air

travel

as a

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

means of transportation belong to the upper class of the society and a small hike in

air

tickets does not make any difference in their choice. At the same time,

this

might have a huge impact on students and job seekers who resort to

air

travel

out of necessity and which is not fair.

On the other hand

, there are many possible ways to reduce the number of

air

travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

. The most alternative is that the government could improve public transportation for longer distance to encourage frequent

air

travelers

a person who changes location

travellers

to give up flying.

For instance

, in Japan

Accept space

the preferred choice of transportation of people is bullet trains that

travel

at the speed 350 to 400 kilo meters per hour and the Japanese barely

travel

air

In addition

to that, these trains run cleaner energy

such

as nuclear,

therefore

do not pollute our

air

. To conclude, while some people strongly argue that an increase in the price of flight tickets could result in decreased

air

traffic, I am unconvinced of the effect of

such

strategy as it seems to me that there are much better ways to do so.

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental pollution
deterrent
aviation technologies
disproportionately affect
global carbon tax
alternative solutions
tourism-dependent economies
cleaner fuels
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