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In many places , new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion on this?

#places #homes #space #countryside #people
Housing is one of the basic things a human
needs
Suggestion
need
, and with the increasing population there is
alway
at all times; all the time and on every occasion
always
 a high demand for building houses. In my opinion the houses should be built in the countryside, so that the population is evenly spread in the region.
Firstly
, the areas which need more houses are
over crowded
cause to crowd together too much
overcrowded
 with people, and
appartments
a suite of rooms usually on one floor of an apartment house
apartments
appointments
 are not able to
coup
brick that is laid sideways at the top of a wall
cope
 up with these rising numbers. The Countryside has
land but
Suggestion
landed, but
landed but
 no one to live on it, and
hence
 we need new
bulidings
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
buildings
 to transfer the people onto the new area.
For instance
, making houses in the outskirts of the city will help making it an even ground for population.
In addition
, these
transfer
Suggestion
transfers
 of people will create jobs, and provide a
bost
increase
boost
boat
 to grow the countryside. The people who move may start businesses and
this
 gives people a reason to stay in the rural area, and when they hire
staff they
Accept comma addition
staff, they
 would think of staying which may reduce a bit of demand of housing in the urban area.
For example
, a doctor opens a clinic which not only
developes
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develops
 the outskirts but
also
 grows job opportunity. In conclusion, the houses
should be build
Suggestion
should be built
should build
on
Suggestion
in
 the countryside, as it will benefit the development and reduce the crowded areas of the city.
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