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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, a large number of people tend to go to foreign countries; some of them are not familiar with the circumstances.
Although
 they can speak a foreign
language
, it does not mean that they will not make any mistake, and some of the social e=" background: #94c9ff;">
problens
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
, as well as the practical problems, cannot be ignored. It is no denying that we are living in a global village now, people can quickly get a chance to learn a foreign
language
.
For instance
, by attending the summer camping or go abroad for
further
 study. But it is
such
 a short time people can live in other countries so that it might cause serious social problems. Take the word thirteen,
for example
, it is a sort of lucky number in the Asian countries, but it means bad luck in the
Europe
Suggestion
European
 countries. It might be a misunderstanding between people from different areas of the world.
Also
, when a person starts learning a new
language
, the accent might be challenging to
recognized
Suggestion
recognize
 by the others, and some people will laugh at the new beginners, or even look down on them.
Although
 speaking the foreign
language
 may cause social and practical problems, I still believe that it is not so serious as some people said. People who learning the
second
language
is
Suggestion
are
 like an infant, they can easily use some
worng
not correct; not in conformity with fact or truth
wrong
 words in the inappropriate situation, and they even do not realize that they are using it in a wrong way.So some of the mistakes can be ignored because everyone would make some errors when learning a new
language
. To sum up, problems can be caused by the foreign
learnersm
someone (especially a child) who learns (as from a teacher) or takes up knowledge or beliefs
learners
, but it is not serious.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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