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Economic growth and development are usually considered to be beneficial both for individuals and for society as a whole. Do the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Almost every country wants
be
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to be
 economically developed country. Economic improvement plays a huge part in the lives of people and society. In
this
 essay I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of economic
development
. Economic growth elevates the lifestyle of people. It increases the income of working community which in turn makes their family live better and enjoy the life. The rise in the economy might make a country self sustainable and to be less dependent on other nations. Economic growth provides
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
 to explore new technologies and implement
them which
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them, which
 will provide
solution
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a solution
the solution
solutions
 to
variety
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a variety
 of problems.
For example
, Developed countries like
USA
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the USA
 are investing the huge amount of money in exploring alternate planets and finding solutions
for
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to
 global warming which will make the world better.
Development
 of
economy
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the economy
also have
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also has
has also had
 its own disadvantages. For rapid economic
development
, government may need to build more industries.
This
 will cause the destruction of natural resources.
For example
, Road transport contributes to faster movement of goods which in turn
rises
raise the level or amount of something
raises
 the economic
development
 but the implementation of world class road will destroy forests, fertile lands etc., Industries utilizing million litres of water per day may cause scarcity
in
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of
 water. In summary,
Although
 economic
development
 may have some disadvantages, I feel that the impact it has on our quality of life and society outweighs the disadvantages.
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