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Nowadays our lives
is
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are

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changed by
tecnologhy
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technology

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neither in learning
fileds ir
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fields or

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medicine and
explore
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exploring

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the galaxy, It
allow
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allows

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for
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astronomers to get some more information about the universe. But some
people
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are not satisfied
about
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with

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that they believe that it is
waste
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a waste

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of time and
sources
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resources

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,
whereas
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others are interested in that.
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However
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However,

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I strongly agree
with
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that
scientes
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scientists

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should do
every thing
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everything

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to
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for

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space exploration. In
this
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essay
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essay,

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I will discuss
the
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apply

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both views
in
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this
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contrevercial
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controversial

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issue.
Firstly
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, there is no doubt that
triyng
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trying

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to discover
galaxy
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the galaxy

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is interesting but some
said
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say

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that regardless
about
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of

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the
interset
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internet

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side
people
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have to be worried about our
resources
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such
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as
fuels
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fuel

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and
vechiels
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vehicles

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. As it
know
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knows

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a
mition
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mission
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like that
need
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needs

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a huge tanks
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a huge tank
huge tanks

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of
fuels
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fuel

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, it should be given
for
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to

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African
people
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or to
safe
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save

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some countries.
For example
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, NASA spend a million euro monthly on their
emplyees
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employees

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and machines
according to
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a survey.
as
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a
resault
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result

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people
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are worried
abut
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about

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earth
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resources
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wich
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which

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should be used in the right place.
Secondly
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,
knoing
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knowing

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every thing
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everything

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about
life
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in
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the
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earth and outside it is so exited for some
people
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, they are keen on astronomy and ready to put all
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resources
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the resources

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which they have to discover space. Because space exploration might allow
for
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people
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to find another
life
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in
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the moon , having a
starnge
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strange

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experience like that
it
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is it

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worth.
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, NASA always
send
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sends

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a cautions
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cautions
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for us , there is
a
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apply

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hitting in
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the galaxe
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galaxe
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so till
thes
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that

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moment
happened
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happens

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we have to protect
our selves
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ourselves

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and find another
life
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outside. so some believe that we have a
one
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short
life
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and we should do all
what
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we can to get the knowledge.
To conclude
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,In my opinion I
strongle
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agree
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that we need to get the
sufficent awarness
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sufficient awareness

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about
galaxy
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the galaxy

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it
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so it

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might discover
a
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apply

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new good
resources
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and I
apeal
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appeal

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astronomers
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to astronomers

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to focus on
planet
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planets

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to survive us.
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

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