Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Environmantal
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Environmental
pollution is a serious
eqaution
something done (usually as opposed to something said)
action
occasion
equation
for the globe. Problems like land contamination and Ocean dilution are some of the outcome of environmental pollution. I believe that these problems should be
tackle
Suggestion
tackled
at an international level
upto
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up to
a certain extend and local
communities
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community
should
also
take action in order to sustain the environment. Oceans and seas
covers
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cover
about 75 percent of the planet earth. All the Oceans and most of the seas are
governs
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governed
by more than one country and
therefore
these
water
bodies should be
teaken
understood in a certain way; made sense of
taken
taking
care at an international level.
For example
,
Pacific Oceon
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the Pacific Ocean
Pacific Ocean
Pacific Oceans
is a huge
water
deposit and provide sea shore to Nine different countries. In
adddition these
Accept comma addition
addition, these
addition these
countries
also
have their border restriction
on
Suggestion
in
this
giant
water
body so that refugees are not able to enter their
counrty
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
county
through
water
.
Therefore
, Pacific ocean should be
devided
separated into parts or pieces
divided
decided
onto
Suggestion
into
parts for these countries in order to clean and take care.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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