Figures show that some countries have an ever-increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 or younger. What do you think are the current and future effects of this trend for those countries?

Some demographic surveys have shown that the proportions of young people are rising rapidly.

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as illiteracy and poverty or wars or any other reasons.

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effects of

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trend on those

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. The most important current impact of

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a trend would be on the national economy. For instance, goods and services would need to be imported which would lead to an unstable economy.

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, the future effect would be different as there would be more people within the country needing employment.

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there might arise the problem of unemployment.

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to the effects on

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, there would be social implications

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. The government will have to invest a lot

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educational institutes as more children need more schools and colleges.

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more spending on

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be needed. The

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result would be that the education and

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infrastructure would be well developed. If careful management of

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a situation is done by the government,

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, by providing good education and

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facilities,

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the future outcomes could be quite positive. The society would be younger and more vibrant. The culture of those

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would be more fast-paced than the traditional culture. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that the culture and lifestyle of these

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would be transformed if the population

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younger. Fresh opportunities and challenges would both be on the way. The trend would cause multiple possible effects and these

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should strengthen the education and

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infrastructure to overcome its negative influence.