A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • give contact details for when you are away • give instructions on how to care for your pet • describe other household duties

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Dear Sarah, I am pleased to write

this

letter and thank you for accepting my humble request to look after my apartment and cat for a week. I am sharing all

needed

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the needed

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details below in

this

letter. I am flying to California tomorrow morning and I will be back by Sunday evening.

Although

I will be available on messenger for text messages, you can talk to me on my cellphone number for any sort of urgency. I hope that you will have a great time with my cat. It is a darling and lovely friend of mine. It takes meal twice a day, once in the morning and

then

once in the evening. Animal eatables are kept in the

first

right draw of my kitchen. Feed it and if possible give it a shower on Sunday morning.

In addition

this

, pay

electricity

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the electricity

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bill which is due

for

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Tuesday. I have kept some cash and bill on the table. Please don’t worry about the laundry and kitchen, I will fix things when I will come back. I am hoping that you take care of everything at home. Best wishes, Miss X

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

191 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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