People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?

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Nowadays, there are many people choose to

living

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live

big cities for their better future

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but

besides

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the benefits urban areas bring, people

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face

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a host of issues

everyday

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every day

. In

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essay, I am going to explain some drawbacks, which they

face

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, and according to my point of view motive people towards rural towns is the best way to solve

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issue by the

government

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. There are some problems people

face

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in big cities.

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the living in big

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living in the big

cities are very expensive as compared to small towns.

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, citizens have to pay high prices for housing, transportation and even for food.

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, huge traffic jams

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are

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a major problem in big cities. Because all the people and business in these cities depend on private vehicles.

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, the rods are

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becoming

flooded with the transportation at the peak hours and people

face

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difficulties to reach their destinations.

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, the shortage of enough space is

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important difficulty

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an important difficulty

for citizens of big cities. As we observed people living in multistory buildings in these cities so that they do not get enough space to make park, small playground for their children and so on.

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, there are some solutions the

government

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can change

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situation of large city people. I consider that motivating people towards the regional towns is

best way

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the best way

to give relief to the big city natives. But to get the attention of

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the public

to the small towns the

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should bring the all

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should bring all the

major facilities

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the rural towns

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as better public transportation and excellent rods, which help them to

rech

reach a destination, either real or abstract

reach

at big cities in small amount of time.

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, the

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need to open colleges and universities in small towns. Because a lot of students go to big cities for their

education

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educational

purposes.

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but not the least, people moved to big cities for employment. If the

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should build factories in small

towns

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towns, then

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people obviously choose to stay

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regional towns. In conclusion, I believe that it is

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government responsibility

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a government responsibility

to look after the welfare of its people. The migration to the small towns work out if the

government

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provides facilities like big cities.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

363 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban congestion
traffic jams
lengthy commutes
high cost of living
financial strain
air pollution
noise pollution
quality of life
green space
recreational areas
social isolation
fast-paced lifestyle
public services strain
overpopulation

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