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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph illustrates annual changing of
kolkata
one of the largest cities in India and one of the largest cities in the world; located in eastern India; suffers from poverty and overcrowding
Kolkata
 climate which is
present
Suggestion
presently
 2 parameters by precipitation,
temperature
. A glance at the graphs reveal that the
temperature
 circulate between 20 and 30
degree
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degrees
, while the rainfall is not
stabilize
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stabilized
 by during
month
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the month
a month
. The data clearly show that the
temperature
 and precipitation rise from
january
the first month of the year; begins 10 days after the winter solstice
January
 to
may
the month following April and preceding June
May
. When the
temperature
reach
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reaches
 a
highest
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high
 point, volume of rainfall increased sharply when it is in
june
the month following May and preceding July
June
 and
july
the month following June and preceding August
July
. July is the most raining month in
year
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a year
the year
. After following 2
month
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months
, the over the 300
prepatition
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repetitions
repetition
 per square has
effect
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an effect
 on the
kolkata
one of the largest cities in India and one of the largest cities in the world; located in eastern India; suffers from poverty and overcrowding
Kolkata
 climate.
in
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In
october
the month following September and preceding November
October
, rainfall
sharply drop
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sharply drops
 under 160 precipitation, just as the
temperature
decrease
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decreases
 too.
However
, the heat does not decline under 20
degree
Suggestion
degrees
. In short, in summer
times which
Accept comma addition
times, which
 explained
june
the month following May and preceding July
June
,
july
the month following June and preceding August
July
 and
agust
the month following July and preceding September
August
a gust
august
 are
passig
(American football) a play that involves one player throwing the ball to a teammate
passing
 heavy raining, while the
temprature
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
 is seen over 20
degree
Suggestion
degrees
.
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