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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

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No doubt, having children is
important decision
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an important decision
 in everyone's life.
However
, these days most people take decisions to have
baby
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babies
 in their later
age
 as compared to
past
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the past
.
This
 essay will
going
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go
 to explain
the the
definite article
the
 reasons behind
this
 phenomenon and
also
 going to mention the benefits of
this
 decision. On the
on
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
 hand, there are some
reasons that's
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reasons, that's
 why people make their minds to have children in their later
age
 period.
Firstly
, in the past
times most
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times, most
 of the women's do not do any type of work, and they have
baby
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a baby
babies
 in early
age
, but nowadays, as we all know males and females are equal so the both genders are
concentrate
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concentrating
concentrated
 on their future as
priority
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a priority
. I personally believe that the benefits of having children in later
age
 more than the negatives.
Firstly
, they got enough time to build their career.
In other words
, people learned a lot in their particular field and expand their abilities towards their chosen field. Because having children is a big responsibility
,
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,
which need a host of things
such
 as
person
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a person
people
persons
 should be mentally strong and people
also
 need enough money to bring up their children in the best way.
Secondly
, they become more responsible and caring. As we all know people become mature with the years they spent in learning. In conclusion, according to my point of
view there
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view, there
 are numerous merits of having children in later
age
, which totally outweighs the demerits.
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