Smacking children is the best form of discipline. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, controlling the children is very difficult. Many parents
spank
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Spank
children as they think
this
is the best
way
of discipline.
This
essay will argue why smacking is completely unacceptable and not the best form of discipline. Many parents believe that spanking children is the right
way
to keep them in
control
because they may make mistakes which they are not aware of it. By doing
this
, they will be more cautious. They are justifiably worried
about their children of
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about their children
making mistakes which puts both of them in trouble.
On the other hand
,
some
Suggestion
Some
people think that the traditional
way
of controlling children is the finest. A recent study done by the professor at the university of California states that "90 percent of the parents smack their children" to
control
them. There have been some recorded instances in
india where
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India, where
India where
they use
this
orthodox approach to the children in order to avoid
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
mistakes.
Therefore
, they think beating is the only
way
to
control
their children. On the other side, there are many down side of doing
this
. I understand why they do
this
,
however it
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however, it
is spreading a negative
vibes
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vibe
across
community
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the community
communities
a community
. One of the main effect is that, if children got an exposure to violence at an early age it will impact their mind.
For instance
, a person at new
york
the English royal house (a branch of the Plantagenet line) that reigned from 1461 to 1485; its emblem was a white rose
York
was arrested and he states that "he was experienced to violence by their parents" that became him today. There are many ways to
control
them
for example
, by abusing or shouting to keep them in
control
.
Therefore
, spanking is not the best
way
.
This
essay argued why spanking children is completely unacceptable and not the best form of
discpline
a branch of knowledge
discipline
. In my opinion, I totally disagree as that would
effect
have an effect upon
affect
them in their future.
Submitted by sumanthkadulla1709 on

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