Many students find it difficult to learn subjects like mathematics and philosophy and hence they should be optional in schools. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, education has always been a topic of debate among parents as well as teachers. Many students find subjects like mathematics and philosophy difficult to learn. While some argue that these
topic
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topics
are of utmost importance and should be compulsory, others say it should be optional. I personally agree with the latter side of
argument
Suggestion
the argument
an argument
. On the one hand, some people believe that all subjects should be taught in schools irrespective of children's
choice
. They say it is necessary to have all the basic skills to survive in
this
world and
hence
there should not be any
choice
or preference. Even though few find topics like philosophy and history difficult to understand, they argue that it will help children understand others, appreciate them and get to know what our past is so that they can learn from it and avoid the same mistakes.
For instance
, many countries like India has included incidents like World War,
French revolution
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the French revolution
and freedom struggle in their
curicullum
an integrated course of academic studies
curriculum
to make
future generation
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the future generation
knowledgeable about our past.
On the other hand
, another set of people
are
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is
of the opinion that everyone, including children, ought to have a
choice
and it should be respected and I completely agree with
this
. It is high time we should realise the fact that every individual is different and scoring high marks in examination is not the correct criteria to judge someone's ability.
Besides
, there is no need to force students to learn everything under the sun.
For instance
, due to technological advancements, majority of computational tasks are done by computers and high end calculators.
Hence
, it is not mandatory to learn mathematics if someone is finding it difficult. Some will be interested in philosophy, while some in
arts
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the arts
. They should be allowed to follow their passion and pursue a career in that rather than forcing them to be like few others who are good at every subject. There are indeed a lot of
sucessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
people who are college drop outs and who has learning disabilities like dyslexia.
Therefore
,
instead
of forcing kids, they should follow their heart. To conclude, it has always been a practice and believe that schools should teach everything. In my opinion, what one should learn have to be their
choice
based on their interest and no subject should be made a mandate for studies.
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