When designing a building, the most important factor is the intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Construction industry
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The construction industry
has become a booming one and received a great deal of public concern around the world in recent years.
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the outside beauty of a building is
an
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a
relatively important factor to be considered when designing a new one, a building’s
function
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should still be more highly valued than any other elements. On the one hand, it is true that
exterior
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the exterior appearance
appearance
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plays significant role
to
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of
a building itself as well as its surrounding area to some extent.
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, in an increasingly competitive market these days, a building with good-looking
appearance
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will draw people’s attention and
therefore
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induce them to pay a visit.
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, if a new commercial centre is erected with a structure of full-glass walls that displays a variety of
merchandises
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merchandise
inside, people will have
tendency
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tended
to come over to make a purchase, thereby gain more profit for the owner.
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, the outside look of a building
also
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makes
great contribution
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a great contribution
to the scenery of its surrounding, especially in metropolises.
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, unique structures in Italy act as an incentive for stunning landscape of the inner city, thereby attracting millions of people flock to for tourism annually and benefiting the overall economy of
this
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country
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, the planned use of a building is still regarded as a key factor to consider when
it
it is
it's
being constructed.
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, since the chief purpose of erecting a building is to facilitate
humans’ needs
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the humans’ needs
, its
function
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should be prioritized in order to accommodate people’s demands.
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, so as to improve the standard of living of city dwellers, a number of run-down areas in the
urbans
a child who has lost both parents
orphans
were demolished to make way for new high-rise apartments which are better to live in, even when those buildings are not designed in a magnificent
appearance
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.
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, many buildings
such
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as well-known churches or museums had an unusual looking structure due to their special functions. These designs could not be judged in terms of
appearance
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because
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function
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the function
is crucial, much more significant than any other factors. In conclusion, it is reasonable that the use of a building should be taken
priority
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prior
to its outward
appearance
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. I recommend that the significance of
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function
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the function
to
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of
a building will be increased in the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • user experience
  • ergonomic
  • productivity
  • safety standards
  • building codes
  • emergency exits
  • ventilation
  • accessibility features
  • sustainability
  • energy-efficient
  • flexibility
  • adaptability
  • multifunctional
  • regulations
  • operational costs
  • environmental impact
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