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Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

#forms #transport #places #popularity
Bicycles are regarded as the most environmentally-friendly means of
transport but
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transport, but
 it still fails to be the people's
prefered
more desirable than another
preferred
 options. There are various reasons for
this
 unpopularity and some feasible
sollutions
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solutions
 are put forward to promote the usage of bikes. Cycling is inferior to motorized means of transport
such
 as
motorbiks
small motorcycle with a low frame and small wheels and elevated handlebars
motorbikes
 and cars in a number of aspects.
First
, bike riding requires
cyclist
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a cyclist
the cyclist
cyclists
 with more physical demand and time loss than other vehicles while people in today's society have
inclination
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the inclination
an inclination
 to get a sedentary
lifestyles
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lifestyle
 and the fast-paced life which makes them much more occupied. They,
therefore
, prefer vehicles powered by gas or electricity even on the shortest journey. The ignorance
to
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of
 the impact of car fumes is an another
issues
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issue
 leading to inflict on their
surroudings
the environmental condition
surroundings
. Expecting the increasing number of
pedalings
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pedals, then
pedals then
then
 is impractical in
metropolis
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a metropolis
the metropolis
 or even in rural areas.
Goverment
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Government
 should
plays
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play
 a leading role in encouraging to prioritize
bikes especially
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bikes, especially
 when having short-distance travel. Conducting monthly green days by laws, for examples, is more likely to form a habit of riding a bike for every single person in a long run.
Besides
, if
program
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the program
 runs propaganda
compaigns
a race between candidates for elective office
campaigns
campaign
 via television, it will have a greater impact on heightening social awareness of
this
 matter, and thereby
gainning
obtain
gaining
 popularity for bike riding. In conclusion, cycling, regardless of having
positive impact
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a positive impact
 on
environment
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the environment
, has become a rare picture in the modern world for some reasons.
Goverment
Suggestion
Government
,
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,
therefore
, should take some steps to reverse
this
 situation.
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