if a product is sold and people but it, then advertising is not necessary and can be considered a kind of entertainment. do you agree or disagree with this

Nowadays, it is often argued that advertising an object that already have a high rate of sale is an amusement rather than a necessity. I completely disagree with that opinion where I believe that marketing
s
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
the essential key to have more customers and profit.
Firstly
, it is commonly known that advertising a
product
in various ways will
increase
the profit of a company.
In other words
, by posting an ad whether by television commercials or magazine ads, it will surely lead to an
increase
in the turnover of a business.
For instance
, a loyal shopper
do not need
Suggestion
does not need
to see the advertisement to know the quality of the
brand
he is using,
however it
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however, it
is very important to advertise the benefits of your
product
to
increase
the number of the audience.
Thus
promoting a good and targeting the
competitors
Suggestion
competitors'
competitor's
customers is a
necessity even
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necessity, even
if the
product
is already having
profit
Suggestion
the profit
.
Secondly
, advertising is a successful mean to remind the customers about your
brand
and your
product
. To state it
otherwise
, as new products are entering the market, most customers will gradually
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
interest and loyalty for the
brand
in addition
to shifting to another
brand
if not reminded about the good quality of their products. For that reason companies have an enormous annual budget designated for marketing purposes.
Hence
, it is very essential to keep up with the competitors and compete with new marketing and advertising strategies. In conclusion, advertising is the most rewarding method not to only
increase
the sales
numbers but
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numbers, but
also
to preserve the loyal clients.

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