In many countries, women and men are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household chores. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In some countries in recent times, both sexes are employed full-time.

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, it is argued that works in various homes should be shared among males and females. I agree with

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notion because it will reduce

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due to

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on women and it would make children responsible.

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, the

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women who are employed full-time face can be reduced if household chores are shared.

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, many mothers who

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full-time in Nigeria, face an uphill of cooking, cleaning their homes and taking care of their children if their partners do not take part in

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activity

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is minimal in homes where chores are shared between men and women.

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measure will ensure that time is available for recreation and rest, which will promote a good family relationship.

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, children who are brought up in homes where

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works are shared are often more responsible.

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, children will learn how to be hardworking, develop soft skills and can contribute to

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healthy relationships

a healthy relationship

in their homes and communities.

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Crime

Watch Group, a Nigerian think-tank reported in 2015 that

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a majority

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male teenagers are from single-parent homes or homes in which mothers

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full-time and they are still solely in charge of household chores.

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may not have occurred if men participate actively in chores at homes. In conclusion, when

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at home are shared, women will experience less

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and children will be trained to be responsible. Programs geared towards educating families of these merits should be promoted.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Gender equality
Household chores
Dual-income families
Work-life balance
Traditional gender roles
Division of labor
Egalitarian
Mental well-being
Societal attitudes
Efficiency
Domestic responsibilities
Cultural norms
Upbringing
Role models
Familial dynamics

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