In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts while boys like science. What are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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According to the statistics, girls and boys

engage in

make

different choices about their studies. Females tend to prefer arts

instead

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males choose scientific subjects. I think there are many reasons to explain

this

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trend, to give an example still in many areas around the world some jobs, like

engineer

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an engineer

the engineer

or scientist are considered

men

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men's

jobs. In my opinion is important understand reasons behind these choices.

This

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trend should change if it

not represent

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doesn't represent

the real interest of students. The most significant thing

is encourage

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is encouraging

is encouraged

has encouraged

encourages

boys and girls to study what they really like. Males and females prefer

study

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to study

different things in agreement to the studies. These choices

depends

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depend

on the

future

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job. In many

countries there

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countries, there

still is a separation between females and males careers. A girl

choose

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chooses

art because knows that in the

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future probably

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future, probably

she will not work because in many countries earning money is the man's task and art not ensure a

certainly

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certain

career. Someone could link these preferences to psychologists

aspects but

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aspects, but

I think

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a division made on gender stereotypes that are incorrect and not consider the real personality.

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trend should be

analyzed

examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts

analysed

Is important understand

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Is important to understand

what push girls and boys to certain choices. Is important

ensure

react verbally

answer

to both of gender same possibilities for the

future

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. Teachers have to show to students all courses they have. To conclude, boys and girls study different things for many reasons, but, especially in poorer countries, the choice is closely connected with the

future

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job. In my

opinion

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opinion, this

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tendency

have

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has

to be accurately

analyzed

examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts

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and if it

not represent

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doesn't represent

true inclinations and desires have to change.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

269 words

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