You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment. How this problem is affecting your work. Say what u want the shop or company to do?

Dear sir or madam, I am working as a head fashion designer in one of the most reputed fashion designer
store
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. As I need to arrange all my designs and work
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one place, I bought an Apple
i
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pad from your store located on Sarabha Nagar market
last
month.I was really happy using my new Ipad until yesterday
,
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when suddenly
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home button stopped working. I think there is something wrong with the touch screen software.
Firstly
, I have
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of important data stored in my device which need to
be carefully transfer
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to another device.
Secondly
, I
donot
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do not
don't
have time to wait for its repairs because I am totally dependent on my I pad for my work. All my appointment with clients and dealers are due because of
this
issue with my device. As my product is still under warranty, I believe you should exchange it
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the earliest.I request you to urgently look into the matter. I am waiting for your best and
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service as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Jimmy
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