You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter describe the problem with the equipment. How this problem is affecting your work. Say what u want the shop or company to do?

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Dear sir or madam, I am working as a head fashion designer in one of the most reputed fashion designer

store

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. As I need to arrange all my designs and work

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one place, I bought an Apple

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pad from your store located on Sarabha Nagar market

last

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month.I was really happy using my new Ipad until yesterday

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when suddenly

it’s

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home button stopped working. I think there is something wrong with the touch screen software.

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, I have

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of important data stored in my device which need to

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to another device.

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, I

donot

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do not

don't

have time to wait for its repairs because I am totally dependent on my I pad for my work. All my appointment with clients and dealers are due because of

this

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issue with my device. As my product is still under warranty, I believe you should exchange it

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the earliest.I request you to urgently look into the matter. I am waiting for your best and

user friendly

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service as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Jimmy

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

176 words

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«Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation» To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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