The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.

Career is important to each and everyone's life. At present most of the people, think
single
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a single one
one
is old fashioned and while others think in another way. Lets discuss in details regarding both the views. Coming to
one
job
option, Single career
is
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has been
always best for someone to excel in their life, as long as individual's are
confortable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
with what they are doing.
For
example
, Bill Gates, founder of Microsoft Corporation, haven'
t
had multiple,
instead
he
stick
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sticks
with
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to
one
and excel in it.
This
can be
best answer
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the best answer
to anyone, who thinks that
one
career is expired trend.
On the other hand
,
contradictary
of words or propositions so related that both cannot be true and both cannot be false
contradictory
to the above, there are people who
has excel
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have excelled
only with multiple career. For an instance, Verizon company is the best
example
, they not only provide the software services, but
also
Hardware services. Extending to
above discussion
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the above discussion
on multiple jobs, Nowadays,
one
depending on the single
job
, won'
t
be a good option. The
job
security is less, when compared to previous decades.
For
example
, In the year 2008, there
are
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is
huge layoff
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a huge layoff
in
private sector
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the private sector
due to recession, made most of them homeless. At the same time, earning haven'
t
increased according
Accept comma addition
increased, according
to the expenditure rise. In
this
situation,
One
having
an
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a
mutiple
having or involving or consisting of more than one part or entity or individual
multiple
multiplier
mutable
pay's is the good choice.
For
example
, In recent days,
one
with the family can'
t
sustain with 1000 dollars with
one
job
, but can be comfortable with 3000 from two. They can not only feed their dependents, but
also
can invest
for
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in
their education, which in turn helps them
proffession
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
profession
growth. In Conclusion, It entirely, depends on the person, either to stick with single profile or else go for more. But at the end of the day all
these
denotes a person or thing
this
is for
better
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the better
and
hassel
an angry disturbance
hassle
free life.
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