You recently received letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In this letter Say why he would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him suggest types of job that would be suitable for him

Dear Rajesh, I hope you’re enjoying your
post school
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vacation
at
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the fullest. I’m writing
this
letter to put you out of dilemma regarding the selection of the career path
post schooling
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. Out of the two options you mentioned in the letter (either to opt for higher education in a college or to search for
the
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job
), I would advise you to take up the
second
option. Your family’s present financial condition post
sudden
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death of your father is the main reason for me to advocate the option to search for the
job
.
Additionally
, there are no reputed colleges located around our town and
as a result
, you may have to live in a hostel which would add
financial
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burden to your family.
Hence
, you may not be able to focus on your study.
However
, if you would get a
job
, you could provide much needed financial support to your family.
Moreover
, you have
the
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passion for teaching and you can
also
play some good guitar. These skills could help you to find a decent
job
as either a course tutor or a music teacher. I’m looking forward to your response
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my suggestions. Your friend,
Dhvanil
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Devil
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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