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Some people think secondary school students should learn international news as one of their subjects,while other believe that this is a waste of valuable time .discuss both the views and give your opinion.?

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It is splendid to be aware about international information
.
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.
 Some people advocate that international news must
be comes
enter or assume a certain state or condition
becomes
 under
secondary school curriculum
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the secondary school curriculum
, whereas
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 take it as a nuisance in pupils crucial learning periods and state it as
wastage
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a waste
waste
 of time
.
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.
 I would explain both the views in following paragraphs. To elucidate with, the affirmation of international news brings the awareness about surrounding nations which would turn the youngsters to be fascinate to seek not only international culture and
languages but
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languages, but
also
 political customs and policies that lead to enhance student’s knowledge as well as broaden their horizons and open the doors for abroad job opportunities. On the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 hand,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 argue that taking international news as an ongoing main subject, it
devastate
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devastates
 the valuable timetable of the studies. Students get swamped and swayed by the captivating
informations
a message received and understood
information
,
thus
 forgotten the imperative curriculum of
studies
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studies, however
however
, teenagers indulging themselves into the crevasse of dignitaries information
,
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,
make them into the fantasy of another world.
Hence
, downplay the student’s performance
into
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in
 their main subjects owing to spending their crucial time into gathering the international knowledge
instead
 of choosing professional
carriers
the particular occupation for which you are trained
careers
 into various work fields. In conclusion
,
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,
 In my
opinion it
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opinion, it
 is imperative to be
allocate
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allocated
allocating
 the international news at secondary school level to upsurge the knowledge of young generation about neighbour
countries but
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countries, but
this
 should be in synchronise manner specifically going as hand
on
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in
to
 hand by teaching the
students about learning thevalue
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students learning about the value
students about learning the value
 of time and studies.
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