Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and,if so, how?

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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
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became the main
language
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used to teach students in many
arab
a member of a Semitic people originally from the Arabian peninsula and surrounding territories who speaks Arabic and who inhabits much of the Middle East and northern Africa
Arab
countries and countries that speak other languages rather than
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
. Some people
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find
have found
that
this
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way of teaching is leading to the end of other languages. In
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essay I will mention the importance of ensuring the survival of local languages.
Firstly
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, for
muslims
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Muslims
our main
language
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is
arabic
relating to or characteristic of Arabs
Arabic
and
quraan
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Quraan
is written in
arabic
relating to or characteristic of Arabs
Arabic
so every
muslim
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Muslim
around the world should learn
this
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language
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.
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.
But if we built our generation teaching them only
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
they will end up having problems while reading
quraan
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Quraan
.
Secondly
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,
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,
our
grandparents especially
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grandparents, especially
one who did not
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complete
their education can not speak other languages
,
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,
only their local
language
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,
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,
even many people
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
can not communicate with others using foreign
language
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so in order to stay in touch with family and the world around us we have to keep using our local
language
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. Learning
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
is not
bad especially
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bad, especially
for coming generations
,
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,
but people are not taking care of their local
language
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any more they care to learn
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
and speak
fluently
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fluent
as a way to follow the development
,
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,
they speak even with their parents using
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english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
,
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,
if they kept on
this
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way after
few years
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a few years
our kids will not know how
arabic
relating to or characteristic of Arabs
Arabic
or other local languages sounds like.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global communication
  • economic opportunities
  • cultural diversity
  • endangered
  • linguistic heritage
  • inclusive
  • multilingualism
  • language revitalization
  • language policy
  • language preservation
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