The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart illustrates average
temperature
and rainfall changes during the
year
in the city of Kolkata. The most noticeable trend is that the highest
temperature
during the whole period was in May whereas in July the greatest amount of precipitation can be found. At the same time, the lowest
temperature
observed in January and December and the lowest precipitation amount was in December.
THIS
IS FANTASTIC AND SHOWS A GOOD APPRECIATION OF THE INTRODUCTION. Looking at the precipitation graph, the amount climbed from January to July and
then
slipped back until the end of the
year
. NEED DATA. MUST USE NUMBERS. The biggest change was in October when the rainfall plummeted more than three times compared with September. The
temperature
during the whole
year
didn’t change drastically, and the lowest one was 20 degrees in December while the highest observed in May and was almost 30 degrees. In the beginning of the
year
, the
temperature
was surging modestly until the maximum in May and when started dropping until December.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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