Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

No doubt, there are many problematic environments which need to be resolved. Some people think that the dying out of many plants and animals is the momentous issue in people’s life, while others believe that we need to concern the more significant environmental problems rather than that one. In the scope of
this
essay, both of
views
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the views
will be thoroughly discussed and personally, I think
besides
the problem of the
loss
of specific plants and animals, there are still more problems need about on. On the one hand, it
is not deny
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is not denying
is not denied
does not deny
doesn't deny
has not denied
that the number of plants and animals is becoming decrease dramatically that leads to many terrible results. The demolishing home of many wild species
such
as tigers, lions not only
causes
put an end to a state or an activity
ceases
to the
extinct
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extinction
of that
animals
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animal
, but
also
releases
derive or receive pleasure from; get enjoyment from; take pleasure in
relishes
the biological diversity. Every year, people hunt a large number of rare animals to serve the personal purposes,
therefore
, the number of them decreases rapidly and becomes extinct.
Moreover
, the deforestation and the
loss
of the habitats of many other vital plants
such
as fruits, rice paddies to construct industrial companies that affect negatively to people’s life. People would
loss
the resources of fresh foods and the farmers might have the failure to keep the income from agriculture.
Therefore
, the
loss
of particular species of plants and animals is the important problems which could be solved as soon as possible.
On the other hand
, there are more environmental problems we need to concern
such
as the polluted environment and the
alteration
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alter
of climate. Nowadays, the environmental pollution is a serious issue which
need
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needs
to be resolved immediately. There are many results of
pollution
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pollution, such
such
as the discharge of chemicals from factories into rivers or littering in public places. That not only leads to many diseases for people
such
as lung cancer and
,
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,
but
also
has a negative impact on the habitats of animals and plants.
In addition
, the alteration of climate
rises
come into existence; take on form or shape
arises
from greenhouse effect which could trigger off the disappearance of wild animals.
Thus
, people would find out the solution to tackle that
problems
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problem
presently. In conclusion,
besides
the main environmental problem of our time is the
loss
of particular species of plants and animals, the government should consider the other problematic things and give the suitable resolution to protect environment from harmful factors.
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  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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