In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Does this trend have more positive or negative effects on the society?

All over the globe, the

number

of older people is increasing due to the advancement in medical science and low workplace accidents. In my opinion,

although

this

development has increased life expectancy, it will result in more negative impacts on society.

This

essay will back my opinion while looking at both the pros and cons of

this

trend. One of the major advantages of

this

trend is that it will increase the

number

of experienced professionals. Since experienced people

are proved

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have proven

to be more efficient as compared to their inexperienced counterparts,

this

trend will result in the better workplace practices

consequently

more revenue will be generated.

For example

, mostly human resource agents want at least two years of job experience in relevant field because it will help

company

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companies

to utilize their valuable experience.

On the other hand

, there are some serious drawbacks regarding to

this

drift which

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drift, which

should

also

be considered.

Firstly

,

over population

too much population

overpopulation

is the biggest concern nowadays due to the severity of

this

problem.

In other words

,

earth

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the earth

can accommodate

only certain

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only certain numbers

number

of inhabitants.

Therefore

, researchers think that if the population growth remain

constant

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constant, then

then

there will be no place for future generations.

Secondly

, older people require more medical care which is causing extra funds to be invested in medical budget. To illustrate, according to a recent survey, Pakistan

in

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after

spending over 60 percent of its budget on healthcare departments and the demand will surely increase as

result

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a result

of rise in older

people

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peoples'

numbers in the future. In conclusion, it is true that the increase in the

number

of older people will cause a rise in the proportion of experienced

professionals but

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professionals, but

problems like over population and

economy

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economic

crisis will

also

accompany it.

Therefore

, governments should focus more on

young

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younger

generation rather than investing a huge amount

on

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of

older people because

former

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the former

will be responsible for carrying country in the future.