As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time

Advancements in

technology

have given several essential things which are extremely beneficial for humans. Computer

technology

has widely improved, along with certain softwares that can translate any language all around the world. In my opinion

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I believe that even if

technology

has improved and made our life easier, learning foreign languages is not a waste.

Afterall

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After all

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studying other countries’ languages not only empowers people to communicate with

foreigners but

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foreigners, but

also

opens the global career opportunities.

Firstly

, in jobs and academic studies, certain softwares are extremely useful in converting native dialect sentences into foreign languages.

However

, in the case of the visiting a foreign country, these softwares are not reliable enough to conduct conversations with foreigners.

For instance

, if someone want wants to visit remote areas where computers do not work efficiently, or

doesnt

does not

doesn't

give the proper meanings of certain words, it could be very difficult to communicate and ask for what we need.

Therefore

, if a person has studied and has a good understanding of the

countrie's

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country's

countries

country

language that they are visiting,

then

it would be more comfortable for them to converse with the local people.

Furthermore

, if a student wants to travel abroad for higher education, relying on just computer

technology

does not help

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since foreign universities require sound knowledge of English or other native dialects which are helpful in applying for foreign jobs as well.

Consequently

, if students have proper knowledge of the other

countrie's languages

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countries, languages

countries languages

countries' languages

counties languages

, they will definitely find success in their academics as well as in the career. In conclusion, undoubtedly, learning foreign languages

are

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crucial,

although

computer

technology

also

helpful in other fields

such

as, doing quick calculations and recording large amounts of data.

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Topic Vocabulary:

Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that television is a powerful educational tool. Other people believe that television is nothing more than mindless entertainment and should be discouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?