While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental probelm which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world.

Earth is the only home for our race, at least for the
timebeing
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time being
, and there are two catastrophic phenomena that are
destroy
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destroying
the
planet
. While some people would argue that the increase in
world
temprature
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
causes the most destruction to our environment, others currently believe that the effect of increasing industrial logging and
overcutting
win a victory over
overcoming
of natural forests is the most detrimental. I tend to believe that the synergy effect of
both
destructive phenomena will have a
disasterous
(of events) having extremely unfortunate or dire consequences; bringing ruin
disastrous
impact on the
world
we are living in.
Therefore
, I will discuss
both
views in
this
essay and provide evidence as to why
both
issues are almost equally threatening our survival. It is believed that the global increase in
world
temprature
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
temperatures
is causing
disasterous
(of events) having extremely unfortunate or dire consequences; bringing ruin
disastrous
disasters
harm to our
ecosystem whether
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ecosystem, whether
on the climate level, to the
survivability
of living creature, or even the shape and geography of
earth
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the earth
. One of the main effects of
this
is the meltdown of massive chunks of glaciers on the poles of the earth, causing water levels to rise to alarming unprecedented levels,
therefore
putting all coastal cities and animal habitats near seas in the risk of submergence.
Moreover
, scientists believe that over 40 main cities will be underwater by 2100.
In addition
to
this
drastic effect, from an ecological perspective, many types of plants, and fruits
in particular
, are now hard to be planted due to the rapid changes in climate and the
coninuous
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
increase in
temprature
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
temperatures
. Bamboo,
for example
, which is the main source of nutrition to pandas, is becoming scarce in places it used to grow, and
consequently
, exposing these animals to the risk of extinction. Another significant abuse
to
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of
our environment
that is
known to affect our whole
world
negatively is the excessive destruction of natural forests,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.
e
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E
deforestation. Despite the importance of wood as a natural material for various industries from heating to the construction of houses, ships and furniture, the harm
that is
caused by
overexploitation
of the vast areas of jungles is detrimental. Greenery is the single source of the most important gas for the life of all animals, Oxygen, since
leaves
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the leaves
of trees absorb carbon dioxide and emit
this
critical-to-life gas. Not only are levels of Oxygen are decreasing, but the gas mix in our atmosphere is
also
changing, causing increased harm to animals and plants alike.
Furthermore
, while jungles and forest are the natural habitat
to
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for
many creatures, the consistent deterioration of these areas is triggering more species to be
endagered
(of flora or fauna) in imminent danger of extinction
endangered
or even extinct.
For instance
, one of
smartest
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the smartest
humanlike
animals, the orange monkey, is suffering from the lack of places where they inhabit.
as
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As
a result, their numbers are aggressively decreasing. In conclusion, global warming and deforestation are two of the main aggressions to our nature as
both
cause great damage to our
planet
and our living ecosystem that, if continued
on
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at
the same level, will turn Earth to an unlivable
planet
in the not-so-far future.
However
, I am undecided whether one aggression would be more harmful than the other.
therefore
Suggestion
Therefore
, I believe that we better address
both
issues equally and find
quick viable
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quick, viable
solutions and alternatives, as the risk on our cities, the ecosystem, and the whole
planet
is imminent.

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