The government should pay to the parents of very young children so that one can stay at home and look after their children. What do you think are the pros and cons of this policy? Give relevant example from your own personal experience.

Some people hold that funds should be paid by the authorities to either the father or mother of young children to become a stay

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parent

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is a good way of keeping an eye on the kids at their early

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stage, but

there are some disadvantages to

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. The merits and demerits of the idea of one

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doing a full time job of staying with the kids will be

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delved into in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, it is believed that parents take adequate care of their kids and may even tutor them on basic elementary knowledge. Children are usually given much attention and feel

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safer

around their parents than strangers. Recently a lot of families

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have been practicing

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method of one

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taking a

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full time

job to look after the children. Evidence for

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is proved by

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the increasing number

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classes. In

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case, most times a

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prefers to stay back

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to teach and raise the kids.

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, quitting a job to take up child care responsibility is risky for most jobs that needs everyday practice

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as the medical field.

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, Doctors require constant practice and studies to be updated about recent information on medicine and health.

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, leaving work to be

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with the children might be a major setback to a

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parent's

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career as the

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may possibly resume work when these kids get to a certain age. In conclusion, the government giving wages to either

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to stay at

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is quite beneficial to the

children but

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children, but

places the

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parents'

parent's

career at risk as they may likely get back to work sooner than later.