Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging them environment. what can government do to address these problems? what can individual do?

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Protection of the environment is a collective measure as
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everyone has a stake or a part to play either as a
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or as an individual.
This
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essay would elucidate how individuals have degraded the biosphere by burning fossils indiscriminately, as well as the role of the person and the
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in mitigating the effect.
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,
human being
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the human being
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is
the worst enemy of the environment because apart from living on it they
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damage it. The most recognize
way man
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the way man
is damaging the world is through
incessant burning
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the incessant burning
of fossils which releases carbon molecules to the
earth
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earth's
crust
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degrade the atmosphere by depleting the ozone layer. For an instance, the national agency and space management (NASA) predicted that in 100 years time the earth would be inhabitable for human beings to live in if we continue to insult it.
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, with fast urbanization, deforestation has increased dramatically as
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the world has suffered from recurrent flood which damages the society more. What can man do
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What can the
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do
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For one, the protection of the universe is a general
responsibility
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responsibility, thus
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, if man can reduce the release of fossils to the surrounding by buying new or modernized electric cars as
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reducing toxic gases to the atmosphere, it will be insured. Again, if the
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can ensure it make policies that criminalize buying of
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grade cars or unwarranted cutting down of tress with heavy fines or imprisonments, people will understand the importance of securing the universe in totality. To add up, having
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examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
the urgency in securing the biosphere. I believe we as a
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or an individual should take it as a point of duty to ensure that in our niche, we are not contributing to the destruction of the world.
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