Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Due to unwanted waste in the ocean

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global warming

has worsely affected

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wisely affects

has wisely affected

the entire world.Many developed

nation

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nations

around the globe will be facing a tough situation due to three factors increasing number of individuals

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education

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as well as more importantly

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environment

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the environment

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And in the

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10 Years there

wont

will not

won't

be enough space in

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

where an individual can reside as well as due to global warming

temperature

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Temperature

will rise there will be heat all over

country

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the country

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To reduce

this

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issue, Not only the

people

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peoples'

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

have

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has

to take some vital role

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will be elaborating the problems and most importantly the

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situation. India is the

second

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largest populated country. Each state in the country

have

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has

more than million people

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but

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But

in terms of literacy rate,

nation

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the nation

is heading backward compared to other nations.

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furthermore

in addition

Furthermore

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india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

has the most number of child labour

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these

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These

issues are impacting our

environment

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because uneducated people have

vital role

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a vital role

in increasing the number of

pupil

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pupils

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Mean while

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this

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problem has

worsenly

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affected the

environment

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by pollution

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congestion and diseases. In

2015 World census report

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a 2015 World census report

the 2015 World census report

states that in the

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5 To 10 years Countries like

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

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bhutan

a landlocked principality in the Himalayas to the northeast of India

Bhutan

will

reach

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Reach

its maximum population and will face some economic

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environment

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environmental

, health related challenges.

to a very great extent or degree

indians

a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived

Indians

would have to take appropriate measure to overcome

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this problems

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this problem

these problems

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of all

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Young

generationg

all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age

generation

should be given

adequate amount

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an adequate amount

of knowledge so that they have a proper

knowldge

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

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about

the crisis.

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secondly public sector

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The secondly public sector

Secondly public sector

should take

vital descision

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vital decisions

vital decision

a vital decision

on these issues by

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Imposing

certain laws on parents who

dont

do not

don't

send

there

of them or themselves

their

children to school.

state

the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies

State

uttarpradesh

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Uttarpradesh

has the

higest

greater than normal in degree or intensity or amount

highest

rate of

illitracy

ignorance resulting from not reading

illiteracy

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due to the lack of education

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state

have gone

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has gone

viral in population as well as health

realted

being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics

problems and the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

is not even stepping up to control the problems.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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304 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
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