Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter • explain why you are writing • describe your circumstances • ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

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Dear Sir,

This

is in reference to your notice published on student notice board on 25th May about the new

computer

course

(intermittent level) that the college is offering. I am in

second

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year of my bachelors in Arts degree

course

but I have always had a keen interest in computers and

hence

I have learned the basics of

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the computer

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computer

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computers

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on my own. I am willing to join

this

course

but the notice clearly mentions

that is

it only for the students who have completed an elementary

course

computer

. Studying in

Arts

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department I never had the opportunity to complete any

such

computer

course

. But post my graduation completion I am planning to enter the

computer

world as there are many opportunities in

this

field which will help me in making a good career.

Hence

I would like to know if there is

any

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exception that can allow me to

enroll

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this

course

and complete it as per the timelines considering my interest. Thanks, Priya

Submitted by Priyanka on Wed Jul 10 2019

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Yours faithfully,

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Yours sincerely,

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Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

167 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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